Extract A-
The main character is a woman who has done something inner past which could jeopardize her chances of her future and getting a chance.
Extract B-
The main character is a female named 'Fiona' who wants to become a doctor and has been told by other people that this career is the right pathway for her however she does not have the right qualifications for this.
Extract C-
This is about a doctor who's working in an overcrowded surgery and speaks of what it is to work under those conditions, the use of ellipses and short sentences show what it is like to be busy.
Extract D-
Is about a person who has a positive outlook on life as they see the cup as half full rather than half empty. This person tries to bring humor to their work of employment as everyone is dark and gloomy;this person tries to bring light to uplift the patience. This person could be religious orientated as they try to see things in a good way.
Extract E-
This is from the perspective of the doctors wife as she believes he puts the patience a first and doesn't have any time for himself, this bothers her and she believes he overworks and should spend more time wig his family. This shows thatbthebpersonnis family orientated as this is something important to them.
Extract F-
This is from the perspective of a patient who frequently visits the doctors surgery at times where it is overcrowded and feels confused at why it has become empty, this brings forth religious queries and shows that faith is something important to them.
Extract G-
This is from a receptionists point of view who comes across to be very independent as she prefers to look after herself when she feels poorly rather than getting the help of a doctor. She feels that patients take too much advantage off the doctors for the smallest things and feel that they are wasting time. By referring to herself feeling Ill but being able to care for herself, she is showing that the patients can do the same.
I think Extract C would make the most effective opening because it jumps straight into action captivating the audience leaving them intrigued to read on. No as they are not as effective as the extract I have chosen.
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